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Shef Tobi πŸ‘¨πŸ½β€πŸ³'s avatar

yo!! i’m so proud of this work. Loved reading it from the lens of a reader. This was heart’s work.

thanks for having me share, JO. Love you. πŸ«‚πŸ«‚

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Rachel Leeke Alexis's avatar

I’ve been guilty of using a proverbial you in past writings and it’s made me ask myself how can I expect the reader to connect when I am essentially hiding behind my thoughts. It has made me more thoughtful on how and when to approach a subject.

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Shef Tobi πŸ‘¨πŸ½β€πŸ³'s avatar

i’m glad you’re able to look in ward.

it’s something i’m trying to get used as well.

the β€œYOU” doesn’t help the reader. At least, that’s what i’ve noticed in my case while reading.

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