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yo!! i’m so proud of this work. Loved reading it from the lens of a reader. This was heart’s work.

thanks for having me share, JO. Love you. 🫂🫂

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I’ve been guilty of using a proverbial you in past writings and it’s made me ask myself how can I expect the reader to connect when I am essentially hiding behind my thoughts. It has made me more thoughtful on how and when to approach a subject.

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i’m glad you’re able to look in ward.

it’s something i’m trying to get used as well.

the “YOU” doesn’t help the reader. At least, that’s what i’ve noticed in my case while reading.

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